My favotite activity and the one that very much is
to sing,singing is something special for me.
When i saw,in the tv a girl i of my age and began
little,few people know that i sing,only my friends,i
listen to a can song and i`sing it english,spanish...
My advice to classmates is that is they like to sing,
they must not be slig,and they must practise,to be
able to make it better, and who knows if one day you
wiil be is famous:)
Revisa la puntuación (mayúsculas, puntos...) y la escritura, sobre todo los espacios..
ResponderEliminarAlgunos errores de 'spelling': slig = shy; Is they like = if they like; I listen to a can song = i listen to a song..
Da un repasito general a todo lo que tiene que ver con la forma de tu texto
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